Hitogata

Hitogata 

High 

cheekbones,

long 

     hair, 

pointed 

hat

     dipped 

then

pushed 

     down 

a 

brook,

     far 

away.

[haiku] 

Hitogata 

High cheekbones,

long hair, pointed hat

     dipped then

pushed down a brook,

     far away.

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