Bow

Bow

 

Like the tidal flow,

the ten thousand things

     rise and fall.

These things make muddy

tide pools.     These pools

     hide real changes

within this present life

     that bow

like swirling sands.

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I Bow

 

Like the tidal flow,

the ten thousand things

     rise and fall.

These things make muddy

tide pools.     These pools

     hide real changes

within this present life

     that bow

like swirling sands.

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