Spotting

Spotting 

My mother and I used 

                    to look 

          for coins 

on the ground 

          when we 

                         walked 

to the grocery store. 

     "This is what Bet

Steece and I did," 

          she said. "So we 

               could afford 

     some cigarettes." 

[confessional]

Spotting 

My mother and I used to look 

for coins on the ground when we 

walked to the grocery store. 

"This is what Bet Steece and I did," 

she said. "So we could afford 

          some cigarettes." 

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