Offshore

Offshore

Offshore, mostly kelp,

     seaweed forests,

tall against greenish

blue depths, brine washed,

     faraway folded,

          diminished phrases,

curling words twinning

          too many zany

     grains of sand flown

in wind, in such chains,

          wings flapping,

     joined as scrolls.

[surrealist]

Phrases

Offshore, mostly kelp,

     seaweed forests,

tall against greenish

blue depths, brine washed,

     faraway folded,

          diminished phrases,

curling words twinning

          too many zany

     grains of sand flown

in wind, in such chains,

          wings flapping,

     joined as scrolls.

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