Hermit

Hermit

A hermit hidden

halfway underground

sits at his window

     and watches

for junco, titmouse,

wrens, sparrows,

     goldfinch.

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Hermit 

A hermit hidden

halfway underground

sits at my window

     and watches

for junco, titmouse,

wrens, sparrows,

     goldfinch.

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